BIRTHDAY

December 26 is my best friend’s birthday. We celebrated with my friends last month. I have been known her when I was elementary school student. We joined in same volley ball team when we were elementary school, and junior high school student. We spent many times each other, so I get along with her. High school was different, but we often met, and play each other. She always listens to me, and talks to me a lot of things. It is very fun for me to chat with her. She is my vaunted friend. We went to buy a bag which color was red as a present before her birthday. Also, we bought flowers which color was orange, yellow, and white. I thought that these colors were match with her. We went to restaurant which name was Buen. There has a lot of menu. For example, pizza, pasta, meet, and deserts. We could choose seven menus ourselves, and we could eat deserts as much as possible. There was no limit the time, so we could chat for a long time. Dishes were very delicious. I recommend this restaurant. This restaurant is just delicious. If you want to hold a birthday party, you should tell to the restaurant. This restaurant has a birthday plan. When cake is brought the table, there was birthday music all through the restaurant. Other people celebrate together. It is very enjoyable, and can make an affection. When this situation, my friend was crying. The party was a success. I want my friends to have a very happy year. I want to play with her many times.

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TP-03: My birthday

My favorite season is winter, because this season has my birthday. My birthday is December, so I can eat a cake and get a lot of presents. My birthday and my sister's birthday is same, so I can eat two cakes. We order our cakes at acquaitance's cake shop. This shop can draw, so I draw some pictures which I like every year. Its picture is very wonderful. I get a lot of presets from my parents and my friends every year. In particular, when I had gotten a present which I have glad the best is LUSH's hair treatment and body soap. The hair treatment is very effective. When I use it, my hair becomes beautiful hair. Also, body soap's odor is very good. Its odor is honey, so I like this. I like LUSH very much, and I often go there to buy birthday present for my friends. I'm looking forward to my birthday this year.  [163words]

My friends birthday

June 26 is my best friend’s birthday. We celebrated with my friends last month. I have been known her when I was elementary school student. We joined in same volley ball team when we were elementary school, and junior high school student. We spent many times each other, so I get along with her. High school was different, but we often met, and play each other. She always listens to me, and talks to me a lot of things. It is very fun for me to chat with her. She is my vaunted friend. We went to buy a bag which color was red as a present before her birthday. Also, we bought flowers which color was orange, yellow, and white. I thought that these colors were match with her. We went to restaurant which name was Buen. There has a lot of menu. For example, pizza, pasta, meet, and deserts. We could choose seven menus ourselves, and we could eat deserts as much as possible. There was no limit the time, so we could chat for a long time. Dishes were very delicious. I recommend this restaurant. This restaurant is just delicious. If you want to hold a birthday party, you should tell to the restaurant. This restaurant has a birthday plan. When cake is brought the table, there was birthday music all through the restaurant. Other people celebrate together. It is very enjoyable, and can make an affection. When this situation, my friend was crying. The party was a success. I want my friends to have a very happy year. I want to play with her many times. (270words)

BR 1-01: The Incredible Present (Castor, 2004)

                                                         

 "Happy Birthday, Lily!"(p.18)

                                                                        

This story is written about birth day present. There is a girl whose name is Lily. She lives with her parents and  her granny. Lily's parents always gives Lily some crazy presents. In her birth day, her parents went to travel, so she could not cerebrate her birthday with her parents. However she got an incredible present from her parents. It was a small bag, and it could offer anything which Lily wanted. However it offered her strange things. For example, the robot that made beds, the space buggy, and smelly cat. After that, her parents came home, and her dad turned the bag inside out. Then, strange things disappeared. Since their life  returern to as usual.

 

Reference

Castor, Harriet. (2004). The Incredible Present. America: Usborne