BR-1 The Secrete Room (Roderick, 2004)

"What a job!" (p.13)

This story is about a house which a family moved. A family is four members, father,mother, a girl,and a boy. A girl whose name is Biff, and a boy whose name is Chip. 

One day, they helped their parents. The wallpaper in Biff's room, which was darty. Biff thought that she wanted to change the wallpaper. Then, they went to a wallpaper shop, and they bought a cute wallpaper. 

When they back to their home, and began to pull the wallpaper. Then, Biff found a door.

Mum opened the door, and she found a room. The family went into the room, and they found a little house. The little house is similar to theirs house. Biff opened the little house, and looked inside. There were in four people who were similar to this family.

After that, Biff named secret room, and use it. She was favorite the secret room. The night, she slept early, and she dreamed about the little house.

Reference

 Hunt, Roderick, 2004, England, Oxford Reading Tree

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BR1-03: Bertha(Michel, 2007)

"We have to get a new car!" (p.13)

This story is about a car. A family talk about their car, and they decided to buy a new car. However, they can not choose the color of car, and there are occurred an accident. Finally, they could choose a car and its color. 

Michel, Julie & Cambers, Mal, (2007)

Bertha, Australia, THOMSON NECSON

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BR1-02: The Chalk Circle (Nicolas, Amanda, 2007)

"Give the MP3 player to Amy," (p.14).

The girl whose name is Amy, she is gone ger MP3 player. She looked everywhere for it , and looking at everyone. Then, the girl whose name is Zoe, she had an MP3 player. They are scramble for it. just hten, Officer Day walked past and she asked why they quarrel. The officer Day pulled out some chalk and made a big circle. She made them to quarrel into the circle and solved its problem. Finally, Amy got back her MP3 player.

Reference

Brash, Nicolas, & Dawson, Amanda, (2007). The Chalk Circle, Australia, THOMSON NELSON
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BR 1-01: The Incredible Present (Castor, 2004)

                                                         

 "Happy Birthday, Lily!"(p.18)

                                                                        

This story is written about birth day present. There is a girl whose name is Lily. She lives with her parents and  her granny. Lily's parents always gives Lily some crazy presents. In her birth day, her parents went to travel, so she could not cerebrate her birthday with her parents. However she got an incredible present from her parents. It was a small bag, and it could offer anything which Lily wanted. However it offered her strange things. For example, the robot that made beds, the space buggy, and smelly cat. After that, her parents came home, and her dad turned the bag inside out. Then, strange things disappeared. Since their life  returern to as usual.

 

Reference

Castor, Harriet. (2004). The Incredible Present. America: Usborne